Below is the map of Brandfield, city planner have decided to build a two new shopping mall for the city, and two sites S1 and S2 have been proposed. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
As the map illustrates that two sites S1 and S2 is being introduced for construction of mall in Brandfield city.
Site S1 and S2 are the sites which selected for Two shopping malls nearby housing estate and industrial estate above the railway line. This provides an easy access for city people to visit there to fulfil their daily needs.
In the depicts map there is an golf course which covers the major part of Brandfield city in the west following with housing state in north, city centre in the middle part and industrial estate in south east part. Here is a river passing through in parallel with golf course from north to south and the mid of city centre. A road which provide transit from north-east and south east of Bradfield city with connectivity of major parts of the city. Railway line is introduced in the city for connectivity from north-west to north east part.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...e above the railway line. This provides an easy access for city people to visit there to fulfi...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ily needs. In the depicts map there is an golf course which covers the major part...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orth, city centre in the middle part and industrial estate in south east part. H...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69032258065 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42458788886 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6149837659 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215171351152 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116859915436 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839481884007 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194289536419 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755830660248 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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