Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Law forcing agencies and big manufacturing companies are the foremost reason for polluting the environment while civilians are not. I vehemently believe manufacturing companies chunks the major role and authorities are unable to curb them to not to pollute the atmosphere beside that people are the least responsible for pollution. In this essay both views are discussed with suitable examples.
Government is the sole authority for imposing rules and regulations over the manufacturing companies. Countries having abundant manufacturing facilities polluting the environment rigorously by the emission of their toxic residuals either in the air or in the flowing water. However, government is unable to dampen the level of toxic gases and waste coming out by companies. For example countries like China and India has ample of manufacturing resources but they do not follow the protocols and consecutively having repercussions on their environment; in contrast, USA also having mammoth companies but they are strenuously follow the government protocols. It is imperative to follow the guidelines to hinder the pollution and make environment spic and span.
As a result, after gauging both views, i believe government and manufacturers are primary cause for polluting environment however people should also follow rules because their activities has peril effects on environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...viroment is also a part which is highly affect by the human activities. But as i beliv...
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Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...viroment is also a part which is highly affect by the human activities. But as i belive t...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... As a result, after gauging both views, i believe government and manufacturers ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29078014184 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83505260329 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549645390071 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2352735373 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0673127317944 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246338698363 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228205568073 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0419622755205 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012252784355 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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