Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.Other young adult prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situation do you think is better? Use specific reason and examples to support youe opinion
In today,s modern society,everyone wants to be free and want to have its own space, even kids too. As per my opinion, young adults prefer to live their families for longer time. I believe this due some of the reasons that I will further discuss in my essay, so lets dive in my thoughts.
First and foremost reason is young adults who are living with families would have lots of support in terms of money, place and would have less responsibilities towards dailyhecks of cooking,cleaning, laundry etc.So they can spent more time on preparing for better future.
Adding to this, with family young adults have more opportunities to flourish as the experience from their elders help them to take right decisions.With family ,they never feels lonely and always have support in the times of emotional ups and downs of younger age.
When I was in college,I come home tired and with jammed mind,but with a cup of Tea made by mom and heartly talk with my parents always rejuvenate me for next task coming to me.
In contrast, living independently ask younger adult to deal various life situations which their parents handle like renting apartments, working part times. In matter of fact if a students wrorks part time for money then they will have less time to study which will affect their grades in long term.
So, in my view living with Familiy is is a better idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, in contrast, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 238.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73529411765 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60462520385 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655462184874 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1497071852 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.222222222 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357119533659 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151134362116 0.076458572812 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117724463108 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164168769423 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610445909177 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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