Travelling to your own country or tavelling to foreign country which benefits more
The word travelling always facinates me, as I am fond of travelling to new and different places.Earlier, like two decades ago, there were less options to travel outside the country, nowadays it is easy, due to more technological advancements in aviation department. I had been to many places in my own country and in other countries too, what I found is travelling to foreign countries benefits more. There are a couple of reason for my stated view, which I will further discuss in my essay.
To begin with, travelling to new country is always exciting and interesting. It's a human nature that new things always attract them. I remember, when I traveled with my family to Goa beach, in India, after one day at beach we had nothing to do any more and we cut short our vacation and came back home early. But this was not the scene when we were on International trip and we were having only one day on Florida beach of USA, all of the people including me were complaining of less time because we want to explore the area more, as we don't know the place.
Secondly, when you are travelling to foreign country, you will have new experiences. The culture, lifestyle and the language, all are different. Some people avoid to go to new places due to language barrier, but there are various ways to communicate like through tour guides, google translations etc. We learn new ways to communicate with these people. This also helps alot to the people who wants to do international businesses. On top of all, we can taste the different foods of different places. And when you are in foreign country currency is different and it's again a learning experience to use a new currency.
So, all in all, travelling to foreign countries are always beneficial and I believe in "Pack your bag and Explore the World".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Earlier
... travelling to new and different places.Earlier, like two decades ago, there were less ...
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Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun options is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...rlier, like two decades ago, there were less options to travel outside the country, ...
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Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...try is always exciting and interesting. Its a human nature that new things always a...
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Line 2, column 428, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...g only one day on Florida beach of USA, all of the people including me were complaining of...
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Line 2, column 537, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...we want to explore the area more, as we dont know the place. Secondly, when you are...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid going', 'avoid gonna'.
Suggestion: avoid going; avoid gonna
...anguage, all are different. Some people avoid to go to new places due to language barrier, ...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... foreign countries are always beneficial and I believe in 'Pack your bag and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69182389937 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78171628544 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.113439473 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276428267641 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899598878874 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130304440495 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184664324851 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116600433039 0.0645574589148 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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