People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?
Over the past decades, the consumption of sugary dinks has never cased to draw public attention and provoke debates. In this essay, I shall indicate why people consume a large number of that beverages and suggest some solutions which
make people to reduce sweetened beverages consumption.
In terms of main reason behind the consumption of sugary drinks that people are facing the busy life, people are burying themselves into workloads so they usually consume junk foods and sugary beverages instead of spending time on cooking at home because those products are convenient and affordable. Besides, the development of advertising industry, beverage companies invest money in advertising their products, it attracts many people who are passionate about sweetened drinks, especially children whom advertisers often aim their marketing because they are easily influenced by sweet things. For example, the popularity of Coca-Cola are advertised everywhere such as schools, supermarket, bus station and even restaurant so it is easy to attract children and adults because sugary beverages can help adults to concentrate on their work and energy boost.
The number of suggestions can be taken to reduce the consumption of sugary drinks. The TV programs, billboards and posters about public health should be added in order to educate and show the disadvantages of consuming sweetened beverages. Hence, those programs can reduce negative effects of advertisements. For instance, The TV programs show information about consuming sugary drinks that cause health risks such as obesity, type 2 diabetes, they can give advices about healthy products to help people change their diet. Additionally, government need increase tax on such products to reduce the demand of customers.
To put it in the nutshell, for the aforementioned reasons, I pen down saying that even if the consumption of sugar-based beverages is increasing we can have solutions to reduce and restrict it.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ay, I shall indicate why people consume a large number of that beverages and suggest some solutio...
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Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...verages and suggest some solutions which make people to reduce sweetened beverage...
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Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beverages'' or 'beverage's'?
Suggestion: beverages'; beverage's
...which make people to reduce sweetened beverages consumption. In terms of main reason...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate on their work and energy boost. The number of suggestions can be taken t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51155115512 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90974585136 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4287455512 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.818181818 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134650731573 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459645850363 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572497902938 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898567451075 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356166901986 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ay, I shall indicate why people consume a large number of that beverages and suggest some solutio...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...verages and suggest some solutions which make people to reduce sweetened beverage...
^^^
Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beverages'' or 'beverage's'?
Suggestion: beverages'; beverage's
...which make people to reduce sweetened beverages consumption. In terms of main reason...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate on their work and energy boost. The number of suggestions can be taken t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51155115512 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90974585136 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4287455512 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.818181818 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134650731573 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459645850363 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572497902938 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898567451075 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356166901986 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.