Weddings are more expensive in many countries nowadays when compared to the past.
What is the reason behind this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
In the present time, marriage ceremonies have become costlier as compared to the past. This essay will explain why this is a negative development, followed by highlighting factors behind this tendency in the upcoming paragraphs.
There is a myriad of reasons behind lavishing weddings. Firstly, with the advancements in urban centers, people are left with a very small place at home for gatherings. Therefore, weddings nowadays are celebrated in marquees that are booked for a few hours against a hefty amount. Secondly, people have a lot of money at their disposal as compared to the past era. So, weddings have become a status symbol for people as a result a huge chunk of money is spent on orchestra and decoration to make wedding worth remembering and more attractive for guests to stand out of others. Hence, all the above-mentioned factors increase the overall expense of the event.
However, I believe it to be a negative development because people often land in debt to meet the standards of desired wedding criteria set by others. As many people take a loan from banks to arrange their lavish wedding which often creates trouble for the newly married couple. For illustration, people who borrow money face tremendous pressure for years in terms of repaying the loan. Additionally, this pressure often leads to stress and anxiety which affect relationships and adverse health effects as well. Due to long term installment plan conflict arises between couples and often leads to divorce. Thus, all these factors make this a negative development.
To sum up, an increase in people's wealth along with the desire to impress people is the major cause of expensive weddings. However, this practice begets a lot of health and social hazards which make it an unwelcoming development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12627986348 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78292854027 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7503720219 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239674139962 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727363207123 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059861364302 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145134793703 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722254235356 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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