What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture?
I am from India and I believe that important qualities of a good child have changed slightly over the years. Previously, parents in my community valued love, respect and obedience the most but now as we are moving towards a more progressive society obedience is getting replaced by independence.
Love is the most important potion of all. Without love there will be no family. The quality most valued by parents was and still remains unconditional love. In the childhood love is spontaneous but as we grow older the loving child gets replaced by the caring son/ daughter. As parents become older they look for that caring son or daughter, who will support him/her in his/hers final days. I still remember the smile in my grandmothers face when my father combed her hair at night. Something beyond the realm of reality, so peaceful and magical.
Respect and love goes side by side. Unconditional love comes from complete respect and care for a person. Unlike love respect is not inherent to our value system. It grows or diminishes depending on which environment we live in. Parents take lots of different decisions when they raise a child not all of those decisions turns out to be correct. Parents are most satisfied when their child respects their decision even when its completely wrong. This mutual respect helps the parents to amend their mistakes. Take Rahul's father for example every time Rahul disrespected him for some wrong decision he tended to hold onto that decision ferociously but when Rahul respectfully disagreed with him they quickly reached to a mutual solution of the problem.
Obedience was extremely valued in my society . Obedience dictates that even when your parents are wrong you blindly follow them, whereas mutual respect and independence leads you to respectfully challenge their ideas and rectify them when they are wrong . As we are moving towards a more modern society parents are willing to be rectified by their children. Social and economic independence reduced the burden from the parents to financially support their children even when they are adult.
Everyday we are growing as a society, what was unacceptable according to our grandfathers generation is now embraced by our parents and maybe when we become parents we will work towards accepting valuable inputs from our children and make this society a better place for all of us. While we evolve as the society mutual love and respect between parents and children remain the most important qualities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, still, whereas, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07281553398 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63750419679 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519417475728 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.3378664443 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8695652174 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9130434783 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52173913043 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103044482162 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357349159803 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707069361076 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737096238783 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602878767437 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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