Information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

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Information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

This charts show the information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. At the first chart shows the developing gloval water that use by factor, in the frequent around 0-3000km. The Agriculture has larger in the consumption water, the second is Indrustrial use they have increased in 1950 and the lastly is Domestic use water, they are more lower fhat Agriculture and Industrial.

On the other hand, the chart represented Brazil has larger than Congo in 2000. The population in Brazil also more higher, it has about 170 million population in Brazil, whereas in Congo only 5.2 million.

The table below show of water consumption per person in Brazil and Congo has significantly. Brazil per person could be consumpt the water has 395m and Congo per person only has 8m. Certainly, following the table below that Brazil have many population than Congo, and about the irrigated land, they have totally different, Brazil 26.500km and Congo 100km.

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Sentence: This charts show the information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
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water that use by factor
water that is used by factor

The Agriculture has larger in the consumption water
The Agriculture has larger water consumption

they are more lower fhat Agriculture and Industrial.
they are lower than Agriculture and Industrial.

Brazil has larger than Congo in 2000
Brazil is larger than Congo in 2000

has significantly
iss significantly

Sentence: At the first chart shows the developing gloval water that use by factor, in the frequent around 0-3000km.
Error: gloval Suggestion: global

Sentence: The Agriculture has larger in the consumption water, the second is Indrustrial use they have increased in 1950 and the lastly is Domestic use water, they are more lower fhat Agriculture and Industrial.
Error: fhat Suggestion: what

Sentence: Brazil per person could be consumpt the water has 395m and Congo per person only has 8m.
Error: consumpt Suggestion: No alternate word

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