The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
'' Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the compliant received from viewers were concerned with our stations's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contract with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its formal level.''
The television station manager suggest that the in order to attract more viewers to their program and to avoid losing advertising revenues resulted from time devoted to national news rather than time devoted weather and local news as complained by viewers.
I strongly do not agree with the business manager of the television station that the loss of local businesses that used to to advertise their during their late hours news was because the devoted more time in national news. It could have resulted due to other reasons such as inadequate finance to advertise or maybe they have achieved what they wanted to at the time they paid for advertisement then.
Also, i disagree with the fact that most of all the viewer made complain on the national news because there is no strong data analysis to prove that, maybe most of the compliant were those that are not interested in national news, therefore i strongly disagree with that assumption because the reduction in viewers may be due to their low technicality in producing national news
In conclusion, the business manager of the television station should therefore do more finding to back the assumptions for loosing viewers and advertising revenue, because there is no assurance that there will be increase in advertising revenues and increase in viewer even if they devote more time in local and weather news.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 228 350
No. of Characters: 1126 1500
No. of Different Words: 114 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.886 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.939 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.573 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 79 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 45.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.792 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.563 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.89 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.134 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to attract more viewers to their program and to avoid losing advertising revenues...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... the loss of local businesses that used to to advertise their during their late hours...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e their during their late hours news was because the devoted more time in nationa...
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Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y paid for advertisement then. Also, i disagree with the fact that most of all...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'disagree that'.
Suggestion: disagree that
...paid for advertisement then. Also, i disagree with the fact that most of all the viewer made complain on...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to their low technicality in producing national news In conclusion, the busi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 55.5748502994 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 2260.96107784 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 441.139720559 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03947368421 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58613912503 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 204.123752495 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504385964912 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 705.55239521 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 22.8473053892 249% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 213.637982344 57.8364921388 369% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 287.25 119.503703932 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 23.324526521 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 5.70786347227 254% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382778423749 0.218282227539 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.266566448764 0.0743258471296 359% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141315787285 0.0701772020484 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262570507739 0.128457276422 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922062684085 0.0628817314937 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.8 14.3799401198 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 48.3550499002 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 12.197005988 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32208582834 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 98.500998004 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 12.3882235529 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 11.1389221557 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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