The pie charts below illustrate aspects of trade between Vietnam and the United States in 1994.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These pie charts compare the amount of exports between Vietnam and the US in 1994. The units are measured in million dollars.
In Vietnam, there is a total amount of exports are equal to 52. Nearly the half of the total exports come from coffee which accounts for only 23 compared to fruit and vegetable (16) which constitutes nearly one-third of the total exports. The less significant items are seafood, rice and garments contribute 4.4, 4.3 and 2, respectively. However, the remaining number comes from other product (2).
On the other hand, in the United States, exported items are totally different. This country makes a revenue of 172 from exports. The US earns nearly 75 by exporting aircraft parts. The next product exported by this country is machinery which consists of nearly 31. The rest of revenue earned by exporting cars, cotton and fertilizer, which account for 6, 12, and 16 in turn. Other items bring only 35 to this country.
Overall, the amount of a total exports in the United States is far more than the amount of those in Vietnam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...e US in 1994. The units are measured in million dollars. In Vietnam, there is a tota...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'compared' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
... from coffee which accounts for only 23 compared to fruit and vegetable 16 which constit...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... machinery which consists of nearly 31. The rest of revenue earned by exporting car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82967032967 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42907483222 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565934065934 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0112407985 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6153846154 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0875869929135 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387227965739 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590142752651 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879407448053 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801164980497 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.