Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business?
Use specific reasons to explain your choice.
You should write at least 250 words.
In today's world, a myriad of people would rather work for themselves than to somebody else. Although some individuals are of the opinion that be an entrepreneur has many advantages and freedom, I prefer to work for a company. In this essay, both points of view will be addressed and a conclusion will be drawn.
To begin with, there is nothing more thrilling than being your own boss. With that in mind, entrepreneurs establish their own rules and determine their best way of doing businesses. For example, researches have shown that a plethora of citizens is increasingly open up their startups in order to solve some market need. Furthermore, as a self-employed, people can come and go whenever they like and do not need to report to anyone, in other words, there is no superior breathing down their necks. Thus, this makes it clear of some positive outlook when it comes to being self-employed.
On the other hand, entrepreneurs take chances to run their businesses successfully. What's more, a great amount of money is invested to get the work off the ground and consequently, the payback takes a while to be seen. Not to mention, the risk associate with economical crises like COVID-19 that might backfire businessman's income and profits. In my perspective, I do not have a knack for entrepreneurial work and feel amazed when I can buckle down to climb the career ladder in a company. Moreover, I am a conservative person and need a regular income without ups and downs to make ends meet. Therefore I'm in favour of working for a company instead of having my own business.
Wrapping this up, I believe that work for an employer outweighs the self-employed style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85664335664 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92635619249 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0123345416 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316600440251 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100730672998 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864952290005 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207015744477 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695768303802 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.