Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I would like to take the conditional stand on a given topic, by accepting and opposing it. with some example's, Let's have a look what may can happen if we thing in both the way.
Firstly, I would like to take a stand accepting the given topic, as author as mentioned in the statement that it is important to keep your old friends than having or making new friends. reason for accepting the given topic is, as we all know that our old friends let's take a example here as our childhood and school friends, they mostly know all the things and habits of yours, and they always wants to be with you. no matter the condition is whether it is good or a bad thing. they just want to do it. and they do with you only.
So, it is good to have old friends in your life rather to make new one, because you have spent a lot of time of your childhood with them. they can surely tell your good and bad things and more even they know what you like and dislike in all the areas. the bond you have already made with the old friends can't get compromise in any situation.
There can be a lot of memories with the old friends and you never want to vanish those memories. nothing can be replaced with your old friends. here I believe that friends who come in your life at the earlier stage remains still the decade's. having old friends with you always reminds about the things and memories you have done before. and by reminding it can make a smile on your face for sure.
Secondly, I would like to oppose the given statement by taking some of the examples into the consideration, like the people who come recently in your life, creating good bonding and joy in your life at the later stage can be define as your newly friend's. it is not bad thing to have new friends in your life. only the way you have or they have interacted with you. sometimes, you may find it more amiable due to their behaviour towards you but that can make your life in trouble, let's see some example that can make the situation worse.
As we seen above that new friends might have an bad impact in our life is because they have the different intentions than you thinks towards you.
many of the time it happens that the person who’s recently came in your life and shows more interest in your personal life may have an intention with the bad things. they just need more and more personal information which can help them to hack our life and we may get in trouble. many of us can easily get in their trap and get suspect. we I believe the bonding and the intentions you have with your old friend doesn’t mean that same will work with the new friends that you recently made, but keeping thought in mind not all new friends will be similar as we have mentioned.
Here I would like to end the topic by giving my thought from both the sides and clear the things with the examples.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...s have a look what may can happen if we thing in both the way. Firstly I would lik...
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Suggestion: Resone
...nds than having or making neww friends. resone for accrpting the given topic is, as we...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...all know that our old friends lets take a example here as our childhood and schoo...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...s and habbits of yours, and they always wants to be with you. no matter the conditon ...
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Suggestion: No
..., and they always wants to be with you. no matter the conditon is whether it is go...
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Suggestion: They
...n is whether it is good or a bad thing. they just wants to do it. and they do with y...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ather to make new one, because you have spend a lot of time of your childhood with th...
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Suggestion: They
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
... good and bad thingd and more even they knows what you like and dislike in all the ar...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... you like and dislike in all the areas. the bond you have already made with the old...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... have already made with the old friends cant get compromise in any situation. Th...
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Suggestion: Nothing
...ou never want to vanish those memories. nothing can be replace with your old friends. h...
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Suggestion: Here
...g can be replace with your old friends. here i belive that friends who come in your ...
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Suggestion: Having
...arlier stage remains still the decades. having old friends with you always reminds abo...
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Suggestion: And
...ings and memories you have done before. and by reminding it can make a smile on you...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Suggestion: It
...ge can be define as your newly friends. it is not bad thing to have new friends in...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Only
...thing to have new friends in your life. only the way you have or they have interact ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'interacted'.
Suggestion: interacted
...ife. only the way you have or they have interact with you. some times, you may find it m...
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Suggestion: Some
...ou have or they have interact with you. some times, you may find it more amiable due...
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Line 9, column 529, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...ome example that can make the situation more worse. As we seen above that new friends m...
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Line 11, column 7, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'saw'?
Suggestion: saw
...make the situation more worse. As we seen above that new friends might have an ba...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... seen above that new friends might have an bad impact in our life is because they ...
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Suggestion: Many
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
... of the time it happens that the person whos ecently came in your life and shows mor...
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Line 12, column 130, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an intention' or simply 'intentions'?
Suggestion: an intention; intentions
... intrest in your personal life may have an intentions with the bad things. they just need mor...
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Suggestion: They
...have an intentions with the bad things. they just need more and more personal inform...
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Suggestion: Many
...ack our life and we may get in trouble. many of us can easliy get in their trap and ...
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Suggestion: We
...sliy get in their trap and get suspect. we i belive the bonding and the intentions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 541.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25693160813 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04632008751 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.406654343808 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3185723149 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.12 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.64 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350914590479 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12133359018 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806959358603 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180888885095 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100892298922 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.