Using cell phones and computers made communication among people much easier. As a result, letter writing could be lost in the future.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Nowadays technology has made communication extremely convenient for human being. cell phones and computers or laptops are such devices people can't think to live without. I strongly agree with this statement that it has reduced the distance among individuals. It goes effortlessly when we talk about the benefit of this innovation. I would like to explicate my views in coming paragraph.
Firstly the main reason behind why cell phones have become so popular is comfort and easy accessibility. We can talk to our families or friends from far places within a minute without wasting any time. Instant delivery of massage has made life so easy which was not possible with old style of communication. Additionally, apart from getting in touch with family or friends this technology is very helpful in business prospective. Globalisation in business is the need of the hour to promote the economy of any country. Business person can't be available every where at the same particular time, it would have been very arduous to manage meetings from far distances however, cell phones made this extremely easy. Time taken by old way of communication has been decreased and this has changed the way of living of every individual. For instance, prior to this discovery everyone used to communicate with letter which was a time consuming process. In this hustle life where time is playing key role in every individual's life so we can't rely on old fashioned way to communicate.
Moreover, if we see the other provocatives of this phenomenon, I would say the best advantage is it's eco friendly nature. Using letters any how contributes to damage our nature. There are so many awareness programs are going across the glob which empathises on avoiding such products which is not eco friendly. It would be quite imperative to say that except from making communication easy using such tolls are helping our environment directly or in directly. Additionally, this is the cheaper way to convey any information or to get in touch with people. Although, letter has so many drawbacks some people still love to communicate with letter because of the feeling and aura it has that can't be replaced with any new technology.
In my conclusion i would support this new way of conversation among human being because of its huge edge which i can't see in old fashioned communication system.
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02290076336 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86282498373 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5368956743 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2472960961 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176921801711 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553309959864 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532695375869 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117671838983 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389783529507 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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