The charts below gives information on the age group of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projected for 2050.
The all charts depict, the population of Yemen and Italy of three different age groups in 2000 and projected the same age groups population in 2050.
Overall, each slice of pie chart shows the population of 0-14 , 15-59 and over 60 years age groups. In 2000, Yemen and Italy highest percentage age group was 0-14 and 15-59 respectively, whereas, in 2050, 15-59 age group was highest in both country.
As per the Yemen pie chart, in 2000 age group of 0-14 was highest with over 50%, but in 2050, it was predicted exact 37%. Similarly, 15-59 age group population will increase by 11% in 2050 and over 60 year’s population slightly soar from 3.6% to 5.7% in 2050. It indicates that, in Yemen, it was predicted that working manpower (15-59) will increase, which will be beneficial for country.
According to Italy pie chart, the portion of old age (over 60 years), will upsurge from 24.1% to 42.3% in 2050, however, the teenager's percentage will decline slightly. Moreover, the productive age group (15-59), will also decrease in 2050 than in 2000 (from 61.6% to 46.2%), hence still remain the highest proportion in 2050. The pie chart shows that, the retire group percentage will increase in Italy in 2050.
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81553398058 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39406954747 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480582524272 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6981780705 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411179337225 0.215688989381 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215973803222 0.103423049105 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130985854385 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329947775648 0.15604864568 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129350922 0.0819641961636 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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