WITHOUT CAPITAL PUNISHMENT (THE DEATH PENALTY) OUR LIVES ARE LESS SECURE AND CRIMES OF VIOLENCE INCREASE. CAPITAL PUNISHMENT IS ESSENTIAL TO CONTROL VIOLENCE IN SOCIETY.
TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
Perhaps crime has been considered one of the most crucial issues these days. It is commonly believed that capital punishment plays a vital role in controlling violence in society. As far as I am concerned, I am totally in favor of this point of view. Therefore, the objective of this essay is to give possible reasons to prove my belief.
We should first recognize that death penalty is similar to a deterrent to potential offenders. The reason is that this helps to raise people’s consciousness of severe consequences they might have to suffer if they tend to commit violent offences. This type of punishment is regarded as the principle of an eye for an eye. As a result, brutal criminals will not have a second chance to start their lives over again.
Another point worth mentioning is that our society is going to start out in a chaotic and disordered state provided that death sentences are not implemented. In my point of view, savage offenders will be one of the leading factors that contribute to the emergence of the bloodthirsty society among humans in the near future. Consequently, it is predicted that this will pose a threat to our security when we live in such a cruel life.
In conclusion, I still hold my belief that the government has to take account of the issue of capital punishment in order to not only limit the growth in violent crime but also bring the peace to the entire society based on the grounds mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y based on the grounds mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7125984252 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70983139445 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.319465118 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19377613795 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609196941055 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695060328503 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104053244719 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264357809267 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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