Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most young people are still learning what is correct and what is wrong, and they are establishing their own standards and principle for many things. Personally, I think that it is important for young people to follow the rules. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, most young people do not have sound judgments, it is an ideal way to educate them on some basic morals. If no one requires them to obey the rules, they may not know the importance of rules, laws, and social regulations. Consider my schoolmates, for instance. Some of my schoolmates in my junior high school, who had not gotten serious punishment after making mistakes, such as bullying other students, cheating in the tests, and smoking on campus became criminals or went to prison. They did not realize the importance of rules and did not have the correct values. Further, since they found it was not a big deal when they made little mistakes, they believed that they would be fine even they make a bigger mistake. People may have wider tolerance ranges for young people, however, if they keep using the same attitude to face all of the consequences, they will only get aggravated punishment, and it will be too late to regret. Thus, that is why it is so important to ask young people to follow the rules.
Moreover, although young people are not mature enough and cannot control themselves as well as older people do, one day young people will grow up, and they will not be innocent anymore. Therefore, it is nonsense for young people not to follow strict rules. Besides this, it will be too complicated for polices and judges to have different standards between mature adults and young people. It is also more convenient to have the same requirement for all citizens. My personal experience is a compelling illustration. I got a fine for not following the traffic rule when I was eighteen, and I did not get any exceptions because I was young. The amount of the fine is the same as others, including a sixty-year-old man. Thus, no one will argue about this, and it also makes everything easier.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that all young people should take rules seriously. This is because young people should establish sound judgment before it is too late. Additionally, it is convenient for law-executor, and most people will not criticize it too much if young people do not have to obey the rules.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 848, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ey keep using the same attitude to face all of the consequences, they will only get aggrav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75764705882 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62512322993 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498823529412 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1968763706 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9090909091 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3181818182 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77272727273 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185749723464 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677685813971 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640339551542 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140139624743 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359392575434 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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