Even though Globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative sides should not be forgotten. Discuss.
globalization is a vital problem in worldwide its directly effects to both developed countries and poor countries which has to run out on the track. both sides have pros and cons impact on economies.
On the one hand, globalization brings a number of benefits for developed countries. Free trade makes its own business have more opportunities to coöperate with other countries that impact significantly on market, the customer has many more choices for their product, increasing competition between the skateboarder and crowded economical market. Second, globalization will be a good mirror for those countries still in developing, not only for the economies part but also for human awareness. Finally, it reduces the unemployment rate owing to both developed countries and poor countries need high-quality skilled labor and unskilled labor. So that can partly reduce unemployed cases.
On the other hand, globalization has some disadvantages. Firstly, losing balances between poor countries and developed countries still occur. it means we cannot change the gap between rich and developing countries. Another solution is by adopting an equitable taxation system, meaning that people are taxed within their personal income. To sum up, taxes should be invested in health, education, and social purpose.
In conclusion, this is a complicated issue, the government should take an action, in my point of view, this even worsens in the near future if we don't have any action plan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, still, as to, in conclusion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44347826087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96910366265 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660869565217 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.5154000258 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3076923077 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1015702617 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034985481292 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294909459036 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608097914141 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109570803406 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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