Every one in this live dreem to have a good career, to improve his livestyle and to be possible to manage his family demand correctly. Some people believe, seccess job due to the communication with well people, other related the succesful job to the hard studyind in school. In my opion, I recommende the succueful of future career to ability to relate a good people. In this essay I will explain reasons
why I believe that.
First of all, contact with people give as a good appotinity to gain skills of commmunication, In addition, we will get experiences, this example from real life. When I was graguated from dental school, I only know the basic information, I had no information about patient managment or how communicate correctly with the patient, for this reason I decided to begin as a volunteer first to be familir with the every thing, that wort give my chance to watch other dentistb and figure out a lot of thinges that can not be able to understand them only form studying in the collage. After that when I begin my own work, I never be struggle in any situation, and did my best, so communication ability can give as a lot of experience.
Further, friends my help us to find a suitible job. For instance, after my cuson finished his education, he can not find job, he has friend who work in a big car company, so my cusion ask him to find a job, tso because he know him very well, he help him to find a suitible work in the same company, moreover he gives him advices and help him to understand everything.
In conclussion, communication with a good friends, give us apportunity to find a succssfull job, in addition, we can get a good experience, even when do a mistake, we alway know there is a person who support us, and gives his advices when we need.
Every one in this live dreem to have a good career, to improve his livestyle and to be possible to manage his family demand correctly. Some people believe, seccess job due to the communication with well people, other related the succesful job to the hard studyind in school. In my opion, I recommende the succueful of future career to ability to relate a good people. In this essay I will explain reasons
why I believe that.
First of all, contact with people give as a good appotinity to gain skills of commmunication, In addition, we will get experiences, this example from real life. When I was graguated from dental school, I only know the basic information, I had no information about patient managment or how communicate correctly with the patient, for this reason I decided to begin as a volunteer first to be familir with the every thing, that wort give my chance to watch other dentistb and figure out a lot of thinges that can not be able to understand them only form studying in the collage. After that when I begin my own work, I never be struggle in any situation, and did my best, so communication ability can give as a lot of experience.
Further, friends my help us to find a suitible job. For instance, after my cuson finished his education, he can not find job, he has friend who work in a big car company, so my cusion ask him to find a job, tso because he know him very well, he help him to find a suitible work in the same company, moreover he gives him advices and help him to understand everything.
In conclussion, communication with a good friends, give us apportunity to find a succssfull job, in addition, we can get a good experience, even when do a mistake, we alway know there is a person who support us, and gives his advices when we need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...perience. Further, friends my help us to find a suitible job. For instance, after my ...
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Suggestion: friended
... education, he can not find job, he has friend who work in a big car company, so my cu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48148148148 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74333933088 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54012345679 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.546822659 48.9658058833 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.2 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362023400724 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157037405732 0.076458572812 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164770107634 0.0737576698707 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202679154789 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.230007265962 0.0645574589148 356% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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