Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children while other people disagree for a number of reasons Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion

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Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

While some people believe that boarding schools are an excellent option for students, others argue about separating students from life with parents. Both sides have their own reasons, and this essay will consider all of them to give a concluding view.

First of all, we can not deny that living in schools during their term brings students variety of benefits. These range from creating a society with different cultures and traditions from families for young people in the same ages to increasing opportunities and exposure to academic environment and social activities. For examples, students living in a campus have more chance and time to meet each other, as well as reading books in libraries, which are usually in campus site. Boarding schools are also an economically beneficial solution for society as facilities for students are placed in a complex instead of spreading all over the region.

By contrast, opponents of this view point out that children living in school would lack emotional attachment to families, which greatly affects their behaviors and results in stress or bullying. Those who study in boarding schools also can not inherit their families tradition, and this would be seriously endangers culture diversification.

Overall, it appears that boarding schools have both advantages and disadvantages. However, their disadvantages could be reduced by comprehensively emotional preparation and family tradition educated background.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, well, while, for example, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56053811659 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89404825338 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650224215247 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6922472855 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288111661916 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105918029617 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926870895537 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170762227158 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114750636112 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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