Many people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Bad situations such as pursuing an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money might occur in a person's life. While most people argue to accept such situations or to improve it, I would suggest to put all our effort to overcome such happenings.
Bad situations such as doing an uninteresting or unsatisfying job with high pay or having a job which we are interested in with a low pay should be dealt according to the persons personal requirement. For example, many students after pursuing their education might have a responsibility to pay their loans or to support the financial needs of their family, in such cases, they must try to attend to their priority of financial needs, whereas some people who are not satisfied with their jobs and are affected physically and emotionally, need to prioritize to health.
Many people might contradict the above statement by stating that every person in their lives have to overcome such stress and pressure and must accept the way they are; trying to take risks may not always be fruitful. Risks such as driving a car without proper training, quitting a job without actual plan for the future might be considered a bad decision during a bad situation.
Planning and execution are necessary attribute in solving a problem. While approaching a problem in our life, the advantages and disadvantages must be taken into consideration and must be discussed with other people to notice their point of view to such approach. It is necessary to include such persons who can guide us and help us during problemed situation.
In conclusion, avoiding a bad situation ultimately lead to more stress and worsen the situation. Instead we must try to plan and overcome such situation for a better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...b or shortage of money might occur in a persons life. While most people argue to accept...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest putting'.
Suggestion: suggest putting
...ch situations or to improve it, I would suggest to put all our effort to overcome such happeni...
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Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...o more stress and worsen the situation. Instead we must try to plan and overcome such s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97594501718 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8533347769 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54295532646 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.7012946225 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32775965393 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135145690269 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930739898138 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200914784486 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109457660448 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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