You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
I am Anand, recently moved to your adjacent flat. I am making few arrangements in our home to celebrate my first wedding anniversary tomorrow, which i believe has created some disturbances for you. Please allow me to explain.
I have planned to throw a surprise party to my husband to celebrate our wedding anniversary. With the help of my friends, decorations like balloons, colour papers, and few lightings are being made for the party. Also, as it is a newly occupied flat, there are many things messy here, which i am putting in order. I could understand that it would have created noisy disturbances for you. Please accept my sincere apologies.
As we are almost done, there will be no more tough time for you. I would also like you to join the party with your family without fail. The party starts at 6 PM tomorrow. Since it is a weekend, hope you will be free at that time.
Thanks for you understanding.
-Anand
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rst wedding anniversary tomorrow, which i believe has created some disturbances f...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...there are many things messy here, which i am putting in order. I could understand...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68292682927 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.661611558 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65243902439 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3911365228 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0769230769 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6153846154 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212939046741 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734833936405 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626848455046 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129208828117 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292119075849 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.