Write a letter to your friend about a museum that you have visited.
Write three paragraphs that focus on
where you went
what you saw there
how you felt about it
Dear Laura:
How are you? Long time no see. Hope you are doing well. I have just arrived home from Japan from an exciting tour where I visited the Osaka Museum of Housing and Living. I cannot wait to share how wonderful the experience was to you.
While I was in Osaka, I visited the Osaka Museum of Housing and Living, which my friend recommended to me. This museum has a lot of transitional Japanese buildings and streets. Also, you can wear their transitional kimono clothes and shoes for free. I took photos when I have worn the kimono dress, and then I walked around the streets of the museum that you also can pretend to live in this place. The staff will take photos for you if you require it. I was fascinated by this museum.
The interior view and buildings blew my mind away. In this museum, the architecture and buildings offered me a great opportunity to understand the Japanese culture for my research essay. Although the exhibition is not a huge place, the experience was stunning.
Honestly, it felt amazing. I wish you were there with me. I would surely recommend you must visit this museum if you travel to Japan in the future. I would like to meet you soon at the end of this week and share more stories about this journey. Take care.
Emma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m if you travel to Japan in the future. I would like to meet you soon at the end ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, honestly, if, so, then, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54782608696 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37832048252 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8033253528 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.1111111111 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7777777778 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336632629908 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1055150187 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910567711106 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204884393381 0.12726935374 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113200133594 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.22 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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