Many modern films and television programs about past events and people contain a mixture of fact and fiction. Some people say this distorts the public's view of history and should therefore be discouraged. What are your views?
Nowadays, online platforms such as Netflix offer us convenient entertainments to watch films and shows which become a key role entertainment in this generation. Yet some people who argued that fantasy fictions must ban since twisted the aspect of general facts. As far as I am concerned, I disagree because fiction is an important creative power to devise new inventions, as well as attract people interested in studying history in humorous ways.
Initially, movies and shows provides full of imaginations to influence people to devise new inventions. Creative powers can concern how to increase our lives without limitations. For example, in the science fiction film in 1985, the famous time machine car is devising a similar car by Tesla, even though it came from fiction not real or cannot create at that time. For this reason, even though movies and shows support the fact between reality and fantasy, it still affects powerful ways in this modern world.
Secondly, the further reason is television shows increasingly establish a number of methods to attract people interested in history. If the media transmit reality subjects without interesting approaches, people would stop watching it since they are lack patience and feel monotonous. For example, television shows use illustrations to describe history with interpretations that are more attractive. This method also helps people learn a lot of knowledge and raise the purpose of education. In sum, the screen of programs uses an attractive method to increase knowledge.
Overall, in my opinion, it cannot deny that fictions have a valuable role in modern films and television shows, especially fantasy films that influence the advantage of creativity for inventions, and movies and screen schemes successfully attract people who interested in learning history. Furthermore, it should be encouraged further to support a lot of innovative ideas on the screens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in studying history in humorous ways. Initially, movies and shows provides ful...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40863787375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91735593691 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607973421927 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2033347115 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198613307088 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651464707995 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311200674954 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122269271075 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167051751627 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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