The bar chat representation illustrates the percentage of Australia men and women in variation age groups physical activity in 2020.
Overall, Australia male percentage had produced more physical activity in two thousand ten. forty five to fifty four age had climbed as compare to others age groups other age was decline.
Starting at just, men age groups were fifty to twenty four reached 52.8 and women age groups were 47.7 in 2010. Twenty five to thirty four group was under to fifty percentage.However, female was increase physical activity as juxtaposed to male age groups. But, all age groups could not maintain equally physical activity rank.now thirty five to fourty four age group was discuss.it had arrived at peaked point 52.5% female age group and male group declined.it was under fourty percentage.
According to future projections, Australia old age group men and women regular physical activity discuss. It was only fourty five and fifty four age group uplifted its 53.3 female percentage and 43.1 male percentage fifty five to sixty four female physical activity fifty three and 45.1% male activity.sixty five and over age group was maintained physical activity in 2010.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Forty
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Suggestion:
...activity in two thousand ten. forty five to fifty four age had climbed as compare...
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Suggestion: fifty-four
...ity in two thousand ten. forty five to fifty four age had climbed as compare to others ag...
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Suggestion: twenty-four
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Suggestion: However
...our group was under to fifty percentage.However, female was increase physical activity ...
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Suggestion: fifty-four
...ty discuss. It was only fourty five and fifty four age group uplifted its 53.3 female perc...
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Suggestion: sixty-four
... and 43.1 male percentage fifty five to sixty four female physical activity fifty three an...
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Suggestion: fifty-three
... to sixty four female physical activity fifty three and 45.1% male activity.sixty five and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22941176471 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61145334657 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9019060763 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315736460781 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198121514086 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685013214499 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25626559087 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370837061067 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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