Who should teach children basic fanacial skills: family or school?
In the modern world,money is an important therefore the responsibility of teaching basic financial skills to kids will divide equally for both family and school.On thế first hand, the school should increase the fiscal lessons on the curriculum. The goal of this is to help children understand the necessity of money and also how they can save money for their parents first. furthermore,kids will be engaged to think about the value and the savings in the easiest way. also,the lessons should be provided appropriate for each children's age stage. On the other hand, homework about finacial literacy is where parents could help. they can explain to their child in the real situation of the family. It makes the child understand correctly. thế examples for the children can be the price of toys that they dream of or the park's ticket.They may not understand it yết; however, when they came into that situation they will remember it. Finally, the sooner younger people are exposed to the concepts of taxes ,bills, and budgeting , the more likely that they will grow financial competent and confident adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, may, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06010928962 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63113088166 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7713928624 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.888888889 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147926342355 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507475265398 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876974060892 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147926342355 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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