The bar chart illustrates the percentage of the population living the cities in 3 continents and the whole world over the period of between 1950 and 2000 and a projected growth in 2023.
Overall, it is evident that the population of Latin America was always highest compared to other parts of the world. Besides, the whole world experienced an upward trend over a given period.
Starting at 10% in 1950, the proportion of people residing in Africa increased tremendously to nearly 40% in 2000. While the figure of Asia in the initial year slightly higher than that of Africa was about 11%, there was a soar to the same number of Africa in 2000. Meanwhile, Africa's population is expected to rise to around 50% in 2030, that of Asia is forecasted to grow larger than Africa which is approximately 55%.
Whereas the statistics of Latin America was about 42% in 1950, that of the whole world just accounted for 30%. There was a jump to 70% in the population of Latin America during the next 50 years before expecting to hit a peak of 80% in the final year. Similarly, the whole world is expected to see a growth from less than 50% in 2000 to 60% in 2023.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of the population living the cities in 3 continents and the whole world over the period of between 1950 and 2000 and a projected growth in 2023.
Overall, it is evident that the population of Latin America was always highest compared to other parts of the world. Besides, the whole world experienced an upward trend over a given period.
Starting at 10% in 1950, the proportion of people residing in Africa increased tremendously to nearly 40% in 2000. While the figure of Asia in the initial year slightly higher than that of Africa was about 11%, there was a soar to the same number of Africa in 2000. Meanwhile, Africa's population is expected to rise to around 50% in 2030, that of Asia is forecasted to grow larger than Africa which is approximately 55%.
Whereas the statistics of Latin America was about 42% in 1950, that of the whole world just accounted for 30%. There was a jump to 70% in the population of Latin America during the next 50 years before expecting to hit a peak of 80% in the final year. Similarly, the whole world is expected to see a growth from less than 50% in 2000 to 60% in 2023.
- The pie charts compare the water usage of various sectors of the economy in Sydney in two years 1997 and 2007 Overall it is clear that the sector which used the highest percentage of water was the food industry The percentage of total water use by the ser
- The bar charts compare how many people in urban and rural areas were affected by noise pollution from four sources during daytime and nightime in 2007 Overall it is clear that more people in cities experienced all types of noise pollution compared with ru 67
- The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spent on three different kinds of clothes per person in the US from 1985 to 2005 It is evident that women and men spend on attire more than boys and girls Besides the average expenditure on clothes grew gradua 78
- It is said that the majority of television programmes had better concentrate on educating the young generation about the essence of social aspects While I partly agree with this idea other issues such as advertisement or entertainment cannot be overlooked 89
- The idea that the behaviors of three year old children can tell us a clue about whether they will be offenders or not While there is some correlation between law violation and human nature several measures could be taken to prevent children from being an 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, similarly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55023923445 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49807508138 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531100478469 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9447826069 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50495690101 0.215688989381 234% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206812002395 0.103423049105 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215656591285 0.0843802449381 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361491286307 0.15604864568 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.256986053879 0.0819641961636 314% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.