You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
• explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
• suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...................,
Dear Sir
Hi! I am hale and hearty and hope you find this letter in good spirits too. I am writing in the reciprocation of your letter for consulting about the option between pursuing further studies in college or join some company as an employee.
To be honest, I perceive that taking a break from your studies will serve you better as while working you can explore yourself more and this will prove advantageous for knowing about what excites you and what not. Moreover, you can coin substantial amount of money by working which will be used in your future planning. On the contrary, I think college would be a little monotonous for you as you have just completed your higher studies and the environment of an institution is pretty much similar to that of the school.
Apart from this, I will suggest you to not surrender to one particular job, but to experiment with two or three jobs which indeed will bestow you a clearer perspective about your likes and dislikes. You can apply for the post of a musician, for instance, in a restaurant and for content writing in a company as well through which you can choose what you want to proceed further by keeping in mind your inclination regarding the skills of yours.
I hope you find this valuable. Pay my regards to your progenitors and love to Ruby. I cannot wait to hear from you about your choice.
Yours truly
Arsh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, i think, mind you, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64227642276 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50447415093 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3817738976 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.818181818 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 4.34317383033 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263748822261 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106278179218 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446656183939 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169880403561 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217034071712 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.