in spite of advance made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
why is this the case?
what can be done about the problem?
It is generally known that although the improvements in agriculture is a reality that we cannot deny, underprivileged people out of there are still starving. This problem happens because of lack of management and the number of fraud cases which is conducted by some people in government and people who in charge of this issue.
Management of agricultural products is the top priority to overcome starving cases in the world. In my experience of making discussion with the farmers in some villages in Central Java, I found a lack of knowledge about the management of agricultural products. Most of farmers in that area have a low educational level that which made their products were not manageable. In fact, the government was not seriuously tackle this problem. For example, people in charge did not control the process of agriculture and the sales of products such us vegetables, rice, fruits and other crops. In addition, some individual in the government who did corruptions are the next issue that is difficult to overcome except by the government itself.
To overcome this issues, educational way and regulation may boost the quality of agricultural management in order to solve starving cases. First, people who are responsible for this field need to educate every people who are engaged in agricultural bussiness. For example, the government should give the farmers a knowledge of management in agriculture and monitor them until they are independent. Secondly, the strict regulation of fraud in this agricultural affairs must be revitalized and implemented.
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| 2020-11-14 | ruang imaji | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the farmers') or simply say ''Most farmers''.
Suggestion: Most of the farmers; Most farmers
...he management of agricultural products. Most of farmers in that area have a low educational lev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26693227092 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05796033506 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521912350598 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9734836518 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.166666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212317589815 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804227441681 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462822284368 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154624717044 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279517544186 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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