Some people think that family is more important than friends. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is an opinion that family ties have greater importance than friendship. I partly agree with this idea because as a rule, the family will always support a person in the face of despair, while it is extremely difficult nowadays to find a friend who would stay with you no matter what.
From my point of view, modern society is individualistic and in comparison with the past, long-lasting relationships between people who are not a family are significantly rare. It has become a new norm to use a person for some personal reason and benefits and then leave them without giving anything back. Meanwhile, true and honest friendship is always a two- way lane. For illustrate, even in a romantic relationship, modern people can be involved in sex-only connection without commitment and any obligations. Thus, it is not surprising that if a person has to choose between family interests and friends, it is more important to pursue the family needs.
However, in some cases, an individual might have a toxic family environment, when the bond between members of a family might become an anchor that did not let the person thrive and grow. In this case, it would be better to break down family ties and look for like-minded persons among friends or acquaintances. Luckily, modern reality has brought us in the space of infinite exchange of ideas and information and it is quite feasible to find a group, which will share someone’s ideas and interests.
In conclusion, I somehow agree that family bonds are more important than friends. Although, in some situations, especially in case of abusive or toxic relationships it is much more crucial for surviving to cut down all family connections and try to find support among compatible people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9897260274 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87645750665 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5891934716 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.416666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281728427587 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101894737226 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809934617723 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177559917681 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061803931678 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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