Life is a festival to the wise. In addition to their artistic and cultural importance, festivals have a considerable economic value.
Write an essay of four paragraphs describing your favourite festival that takes place in Kuwait.
Hala February Festival is an annual festival that has been held in Kuwait every year since 1999 which has a variety of dazzling activities and bubbly events. This essay is discussing the artistic and cultural importance of the festival as well as the economic significance of it.
Some experts suggest that Hala February Festival has a great cultural and artistic importance. As cultural activities are encouraged in many areas such as poetry, musical concerts and art galleries. For example, the spectacular Hala February musical concerts which are performed by the most famous artists from all over the Arab world. In addition to the traditional shows that celebrate the Kuwaiti customs in clothes, foods and traditional songs which are held at schools, malls and even in TV shows. During such celebrations everybody is dressed in traditional Kuwaiti clothes especially with the colors of the Kuwaiti flag to revive their heritage. All in all, this festival has contributed in enriching and reviving the cultural and artistic life in Kuwait.
One, however, should not forget that Hala February has also an extremely significant economic value. During the festival, there are many events that dramatically boost the economical life in Kuwait. For example the huge concerts, the incredible raffles on gold bars and cars and the famous shopping festivals encourage everyone living in Kuwait to spend their money there. It also attracts multitude numbers of tourists from neighboring countries to come and enjoy these entertainments and shopping carnivals. Indeed, Hala February has a great influence on the economic life in Kuwait .
In conclusion, festivals are times when people gather to celebrate the joy of life together. Hala February festival in Kuwait has a great cultural as well as economic significance, which makes it one of the most prominent festivals in the gulf region.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34448160535 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78423338741 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0862463964 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.533333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312138174321 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114084360541 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875337957961 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2215270314 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695470887667 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll as the economic significance of it. Some experts suggest that Hala February ...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...onal Kuwaiti clothes especially with the colors of the Kuwaiti flag to revive the...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ultural and artistic life in Kuwait. One, however, should not forget that Hal...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
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Suggestion: economic
...many events that dramatically boost the economical life in Kuwait. For example the huge co...
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Line 5, column 595, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...influence on the economic life in Kuwait . In conclusion, festivals are times w...
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...prominent festivals in the gulf region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34448160535 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78423338741 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0862463964 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.533333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312138174321 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114084360541 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875337957961 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2215270314 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695470887667 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.