Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
It is believed that parenting should be part of the education curriculum to train the younger generation to be a better parent. I completely agree with this thought process. Parenting is not an easy task that can be learned by themselves. The education system, especially Schools, can play a vital role in moulding the youth as a better parent of the future.
Any art can be taught properly if a systematic approach is followed in it. I believe that parenting is also an art that can be approached systematically via Schools. Students can also imbibe faster, the techniques and values of being a good parent when trained at a young age by their teachers. This theoretical knowledge will definitely come in handy when they grow up and become a parent. This way of training can give an opportunity to the students to discuss with their parents and their parenting techniques.
There are many important qualities of being a better parent. However, few things such as raising the children with strong mental toughness, and motivating and encouraging them whenever they feel down are the most required attributes. In today's competitive world, children are put under constant pressure to succeed. Because of this, they can get into depression and loneliness, which can be avoided in the company of trained and skillful parents. These most useful traits of parenting can be understood only if it taught at a young age.
To conclude, I strongly believe that School can be an important start point in teaching today's younger generation about parenting skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'parted'?
Suggestion: parted
...It is believed that parenting should be part of the education curriculum to train th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81606685967 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6079355708 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287236689971 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111602987735 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616025409144 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187141323705 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355065627354 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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