You are in a hospital with a broken leg. Your colleagues sent you get well cards and gifts. Write a letter to them and include the following:
- Thank them for everything.
- Explain how you spend time in the hospital.
- Inform them about your recovery process.
hello team,
Thank you so much for giving me get-well-soon cards and precious gifts. I hope you are doing well ! I am so happy that you are waiting for my recovery.
As you all know, I have been living in Kiran hospital because I have facture in my thigh bones. my leg is not properly working and my doctor has suggested me to take complete bed rest. During my free time, I prefer to do drawing pictures as per my hobby. Also, I upload some images of my art-work in social media. Surprisingly, some professionals have shown their interest to buy these portraits. When I got to know about it, I felt so happy because I have always wanted to do this to stable my income.
As per my health report, I have to stay here at least 3 months. After completing my recovery, surely, I will join you in working projects.
Once again thank you very much!
Yours faithfully
Ankita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hello
hello team, Thank you so much for giving...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...cause I have facture in my thigh bones. my leg is not properly working and my doct...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49689440994 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5034650579 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 14.5153096721 44.8134815571 32% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.8181818182 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16159083458 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068978140961 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721976924641 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118500457066 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764374771261 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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