A foreign visitor has only one day to spend in your country. Where should this visitor go on that day? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
My country - India has many famous places to visit. However, if I am compelled to choose only one location, it would be Junagadh in the Gujarat state of India. Junagadh is a perfect place to spend one day as it has a wide variety of flora & fauna, has pleasant weather, and offers many activities.
Junagadh is famous for the Dattatreya temple which is located on the pinnacle of Mt. Girnar. We can experience the spiritual vibes in this ancient temple as it provides a calm and cool environment to rejuvenate our mind. People from all over India visit this famous temple. Therefore, it would be a good opportunity for the visitor to meet and make some new friends.
Another reason for opting for this location is its pleasant weather throughout the year. Although I would prefer winter, tourists can visit Junagadh in any month of the year. There are several cottages available near Gir forest and Girnar mountain at an affordable price. Therefore, it is a perfect location for those who want to take a break from the stressful chaotic environment of the city and experience serenity in a beautiful environment. I had visited Junagadh during my Diwali vacation and had a great memorable experience. Thus, I would recommend a foreign visitor to spend at least a day in this city.
Furthermore, this city is hosting several historic places. My favorite place among all of the places is Mohobbat ka Maqbara. It is a grand marble palace which was developed by the nawab of Junagadh. We can see the blend of Gothic, Aryan, and Islamic architecture which is artfully carved into the walls of this palace. Apart from the historic places, this city offers a plethora of adventurous activities such as Lion Safari in Gir Jungle, Dirt bike riding, and has a science and planetarium center. Therefore, this city will be the perfect cherry on the cake for those tourists who are planning to visit this city with their children.
Based on the above-stated reasons, I contend that if a tourist from a foreign country visits India, he/she should spend at least one day in Junagadh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...istoric places. My favorite place among all of the places is Mohobbat ka Maqbara. It is a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, apart from, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81460674157 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65117793088 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9724221549 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152656374137 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466975476441 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640250881235 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986061866497 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046593947844 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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