You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr. Samuel,
I am writing to inform you that I have been having a really fun time learning with you. Learning to play the guitar could not have been half as much fun without you being there to guide me.
However, my company has accepted a six month project with a company based in France and this is something that I always wanted to be a part of. This project is very dear to me and I was thrilled the second I was told to be a part of the team and so accepted the offer immedieatly. This dream project that I am a part of now, will require more of my time and focus which means I will have to work even after my regular working hours. This will clash between our classes.
Hence I would request you to terminate my course on an immedieate basis. Although, I would really look forward to join your summer batch next year. I shall get in touch with you soon.
Yours sincerely.
Harbani Kaur Bhamra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rk even after my regular working hours. This will clash between our classes. Hence...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... This will clash between our classes. Hence I would request you to terminate my cou...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...inate my course on an immedieate basis. Although, I would really look forward to join yo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to joining'.
Suggestion: to joining
.... Although, I would really look forward to join your summer batch next year. I shall ge...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, really, second, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2183908046 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16488996943 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626436781609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7533262223 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25646242777 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897592899497 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768728366702 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169653676108 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689350863365 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.