Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Mongolia had democratic country for last thirty years. Then, the death panalty have not in my country.
Some people think that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Recently, so many serious crimes by doing. It is affect on sociol life and mood of people. Then, some crimimals get a less punishment and but another criminals get too hard punishment than same criminals. Such as, director of the bank was woman is that she took too less punishment for she get disappeared three hundred dollars of the bank. But another teanage's hisory is so sad, because he stole the phone from pocket of someone. Unfortunetaly, he took punishment of ten years.
Society throughout so many people stressed in this solve. But we could not any thing. However, we believe that mongolian government resight this problem.
Another example is that so many violences to be commited in last years.
In my view, Mongolian society has dark and there are many unemployment and alcololysm in my country. it is these people become top reason do criminal.
Mongolia has a great culture and history of many years. But we have been living depressed and sadnessed lately. Young people should tell about society of today government and they should heard mood of young people.
Mongolian democrat is too young and but we believe we can improve own country and follow that criminal would decrease. Also, we would not judje some hard criminal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... so many serious crimes by doing. It is affect on sociol life and mood of people. Then, s...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...at she took too less punishment for she get disappeared three hundred dollars of th...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...tressed in this solve. But we could not any thing. However, we believe that mongolian gov...
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Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun unemployment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much unemployment', 'a good deal of unemployment'.
Suggestion: much unemployment; a good deal of unemployment
...ongolian society has dark and there are many unemployment and alcololysm in my country. it is the...
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Line 6, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...mployment and alcololysm in my country. it is these people become top reason do c...
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Line 6, column 120, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lolysm in my country. it is these people become top reason do criminal. Mongoli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.968 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48359739088 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4246228414 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.1428571429 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9047619048 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.52380952381 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241875634399 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684644353768 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107118807801 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11544598356 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157153190813 0.056905535591 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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