The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar graph gives information about how many units of electricity that were produced and consumed by 10 countries ranking top in the year of 2014.

According to the given chart, the production of electricity was extremely high in both China and the United States, which ranked 1 and 2 respectively with over 4,000 billion kWh. On the contrary, from the third to the tenth countries, they just manufactured under 1,000 billion kWh throughout a year, which was as 5 times lower than China and 4 times than the USA.

The same went with the usage of electricity. China and the United States still maintained their positions in this area, with 5,322 for China and 3,866 for the USA. The other countries had the data for using electricity under 1,000 kWh and the lowest was 449.5 by Republic Korea. And apart from Germany, these numbers were a little lower than the one for electrical production by the same countries.

Overall, excepting Germany, the consumption of electricity is always lower than the production of one in all countries in the research. In addition, there is a significant difference between the electrical units of the first two countries and the others.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, still, third, apart from, in addition, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93969849246 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70733510898 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56783919598 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.5828179496 43.030603864 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.875 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25805477947 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11113202432 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643277055628 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159742887105 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590419153018 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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