Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
There arises no question over the verity of this statement that in this contemporary era, child obese is a critical issue in numerous nations. The upcoming paragraphs will discuss both its causes and effects of it plus some possible solutions of it.
To begin with, childrens being overweight is caused by many reasons. Firstly, the availability of junk food everywhere, a developed city has at least 30 restaurants that serve fast food at a very reasonable price. Moreover, the lack of exercise and lack of doing physical activities also leads a child to become unhealthy and plump. Children prefer spending most of their time on digital stuff, be it video games, social media or mobile phones.
When these children grow up they are vulnerable to some serious health issues such as diabetes and sugar and some other cardio-vascular diseases that could lead to heart attack or other life threatening illnesses. Children who are overweight are often bullied in school and are made of fun for being plump and eating a lot more than an average person. These children are often not able to live their life at its fullest.
These problems also have some solutions. First, kids' health should be the number one priority of parents or guardians. Also, the schools and other teaching communities should raise awareness through creating programs on health. The government can also take part by issuing taxes on soft drinks and by discouraging fast food.
To conclude, It is clear that child obesity is increasing day by day but with certain measure we can put an end to this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, at least, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98484848485 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60983474069 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67803030303 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8930910786 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155572071954 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048523242897 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603266543692 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788450580756 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577695538111 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.