Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
In many countries obesity has become one of the serious problems for child and parents need to concern and know more about this issue to help their child cope with it.
There are many activities children often do that can lead to obesity. One of the most common causes is their habit of eating junk food and drinking sugary soft drinks frequently. Products such as hamburgers, chips, fried chickens and Coca Cola contains a large amount of fat, sugar and other unhealthy substances that can lead to not only obesity, but also various heart diseases. Ironically these unhealthy products are super tempting for children and most of them just couldn't keep themselves away from the sweaty, intriguing flavour from these products. The second main cause of obesity is the lack of exercises. Doing exercises and other physical activities is the most effective way to reduce fat and maintain fitness. Laziness can keep children away from doing these activities and if this combine with the first factor, can result in severe obesity and damaging their health. Another important factor is children's excessive interest in computer game and social media. Child who are fond of these "virtual world" activities will be less likely to find themselves interested in doing exercises and outside activities such as sports. Having one of these factors can causes children to be overweight and unfit, therefore become a burden on hospitals and parents.
There are some possible solutions to deal with obesity. One of the most major solution is that parents should control children's junk food consumption and give them a healthy diet. Additionally, it is crucial to regulate their spending time on computer screen and instead encourage them to play sports and take regular exercises in other to avoid fat and gain fitness.
It's the parents 's responsibility to help children grow up safely and healthily, therefore they should be aware of childhood obesity and help their children avoid it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16099071207 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57701584182 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566563467492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5959464141 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16238844802 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582566742972 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708224539592 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10692405724 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734590478881 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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