Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
These day, obesity of children is increasing as a fundamental issue around the world. The essay below will analyze certainly into the primary reasons of this problem and it's effects on the children life, besides, I will give some practicable measures to reduce children obesity.
It is clear that fast food and soft drinks get involve in the increasing weight of children. Many children eat junk foods every day because these are eye catching and delicious, however, these foods are the main causes of overweight, unfit and obesity of children. In addition, children usually play computer game instead of going out and doing exercise or playing sport, so that they easy get obese, heart problem and others serious disease as cancer. Furthermore, lack of exercise and outdoor activity can lead to tress which crucial contributes to obesity problem.
Some solutions can be taken is parents and school are to reduce the amount of fast food they give to children. Parents also should control their children activities and encourage their teen to practice more regular exercise and sport. For example, parents can take children to some sport club instead of letting them join in computer games all free times. Another method is government could restrict junk food advertising and raise higher tax for that type of food.
To conclude, children obesity can be reduced if we pay more attention on that problem. Parents and social take vital responsibility for reducing overweight of children, so their action to change children lifestyle is the primary factor to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
These day, obesity of children is increasing as a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16342412451 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51416071543 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7557942573 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.583333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160476423711 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619208858664 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453203773939 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106884065427 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398850352839 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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