Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The transformation of climate pattern on the global scale has, for a long time, become a nerve-wracking issue for not only governments but also each citizens living on this planet. Then, several people these days hold the belief that humanity should live cooperatively with climate change rather than counteracting this phenomenon. From my perspective, while learning to live with the climate crisis is irrefutably vital, actions should be taken to prevent it from worsening as well
To initiate, there is a variety of supporting evidence that people should find a way to endure climate change. One fundamental justification is that the alteration of climate has already taken place. As a consequence of various different human activities that seriously damaged the environment, climate change resulted in global warming or melting ice has happened over the last few decades. Therefore, people need to resign to the fact that if they cannot adjust themselves to it, this worrisome environmental deterioration can be very detrimental to their physical and mental well-being. By the way of exemplifying, the escalating of global temperature lead to citizens in many countries are advised to wear a long coat whenever going out in order to diminish the disastrous impacts of ultraviolet ray from the sun
Nevertheless, measures to prevent or at least mitigate climate change should not be underestimated. It does not unreasonable to suggest that even though people cannot stop climate change from arising in the first place, if they turn a blind eye to this imminent problem then somedays climate change will make planet Earth inhabitable. Then, the worse scenario will be living with climate change is no longer possible. Furthermore, climate change may be illustrated through various phenomena, hence many of them may not yet arrive, thereby preventing them right from the start is probably possible
Due to these aforementioned explanations, I believe that learning how to live with climate change is essential for people's well being. Nonetheless, finding ways to prevent it should also be taken into consideration for good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, at least, by the way, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37014925373 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05108506458 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.4190853561 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.545454545 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4545454545 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4545454545 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258045808595 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105180488384 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492943517669 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172152684815 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262094891192 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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