There is an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some people say that the best way would be to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many say that other measures would be needed. Discuss both sides and opine.
Serious crimes is a burning issue and it has increased at an alarming rate. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where one section of the society vehemently deems that to prevent the rate of crime from being increasing death punishment should be implemented while other emphasize some other methods could be applied. In my opinion, counselling and rehabilitation of criminals can substantially reduce rate of crime.
Apparently, various factors makes a section of society advocate death penalty is the best way to put a full stop on crime and have reasons to substantiate it. Firstly, people will fear the outcome after wrong doing if they will know that it could take their life. In other words, before committing any big crime a person will think twice as life is precious for everyone. Not only it will make people cultured but also it will be a ideal for judiciary system of a nation as the victim has not to wait for a long time for justice. Dubai being the prime example, applies the verdict of death penalty in any case of crime which significantly reduced the rate of crime.
Nevertheless, wrongdoers should be given a chance to improve themselves by applying some other ways for myriad reasons. Chiefly, most people undertake criminal activities because of lack of employment opportunities and detachment from society. In other words, they could be sent to rehabilitation centers and proper counselling should be done so that they can also live a normal life. Although death punishment is quite an efficient tool, no one has the right to life of person without giving him a second chance. If offenders are given a chance with proper guidance it will act as a key influencing factor in molding them into good citizens.
In my profound opinion, despite death penalty is quite easy way to decrease crime rate, the added advantage of adopting other ways cannot be overlooked.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97492163009 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76735579124 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58934169279 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6442660874 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857414442945 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606499401749 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163419905624 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353874011817 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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