Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is It a positive or negative development?
Entertainment is one of the most prominent sources by which individuals are getting themselves relaxed. Although some people believe that Actors/Actresses are minting money way more than what politicians are drawing as a salary. This essay will discuss why this trend is observed in most countries, and In my opinion, such an impression on the young generation is having inimical effects on their future decisions.
Certainly, there are several reasons because of which people’s belief is getting stronger. Indeed, the showbiz industry is greatly using social networking tools to influence the masses for purchasing things that they show in advertisements. Although they have never used such products or even consumed them, their influencing power makes followers to start using novel items. In India, for example, many celebs are using Instagram to run their paid promotion out of which they are being paid a hefty amount of money. Therefore, using these innovative tools help them to create a huge wealth.
However, politicians in most countries are only providing services to populace and drawing monthly salaries. Due to this reason, more individuals are attracted towards the glamorous industry rather than serving country on term-based incentives. The overall situation makes this a negative development for any nation, which is developing, as they will lack to hold good politicians who can support their country to progress. Such a comparison has made a significant deviation between the celeb and politician income.
In conclusion, people in showbiz are earning more and more because there are a great deal of intuitive technologies that are being developed to mint money. A necessary step needs to be taken soon to prevent such aversion in individuals thinking if not taken results will be detrimental.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deals'?
Suggestion: deals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42253521127 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90393709038 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.363569143 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24374186577 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729605179952 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733169523767 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137148663825 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599072580402 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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