Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that advancements in artificial intelligence will exert a positive effect on people’s life in the less distant future, while others fear that we are not poised for the era dominated by machines that are more intelligent than humankind. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and give my own perspective.
On the one hand, it is certain that artificial intelligence can result in developmental changes in human life. Firstly, the emergence of artificial intelligence can improve a country’s medication system. In fact, through deep learning as a specialized offshoot of AI, medical experts can teach robots to execute tasks requiring much precision or provide remote diagnostics to people inhabiting deprived areas and seeming to have poor access to doctors or appropriate health services. Secondly, the applications of artificial intelligence can enhance productivity in the agricultural sector. According to that, machines facilitated by this state-of-the-art technology can assist farmers in collecting and sorting produce. Simultaneously, they can boost the operations of irrigation systems on a large scale, which have been manually done by labor workers in my country. Therefore, the growth of artificial intelligence can positively affect various aspects of people’s life.
On the other hand, the rapid growth of artificial intelligence can be disadvantageous. In fact, the technology may narrow down employment prospects that people have been responsible for. Particularly, workers doing entry-level jobs seem to account for the higher proportion of workforces. If robotics with more productivity are put in use, a number of human workers would be written off, which may cause a country to experience a high unemployment rate. However, in spite of possible technological dominance, there seem still unique characteristics, such as creativity, imagination, and emotional intelligence, all of which can set humans apart from other creatures. Therefore, people can totally upgrade themselves by nurturing those traits or pursue careers in specific fields that can not be superseded by machines, for example becoming artists, idea creators, psychologists.
In conclusion, artificial intelligence development can trigger some social problems, such as greater unemployment. However, human workers can acquire a significant number of advantages from this technology and upskill themselves to become more competitive in a digital era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81267217631 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38098579851 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614325068871 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1169739499 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.117647059 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249066586328 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086143418876 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075551835727 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167540812027 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667581655451 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.