Environmental problems around the world are now so severe that an individual can no longer make a positive difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, issues related to the environment worldwide are serious enough that a person can no longer make a positive change. This essay totally disagrees with this statement because decreasing the use of personal vehicles and avoiding single-use plastic bags are the possible ways of making a difference now, the results of which can be seen in the future.
When a person uses public transport instead of using their own car, bike, or truck, they cause less pollution to the atmosphere because there is less consumption of fossil fuels like petrol, diesel. Therefore, there is less production of carbon dioxide and other harmful gases from the fossil fuels which pollute our planet. These efforts will positively impact decreasing the environmental issues in the future. For example, in the New York Times, an article was published that if an average individual uses public transport to commute for personal purposes 4 days in a week, he causes 8 times less air pollution in a year than the one who goes to office on a car.
Single-use plastic bags are non-biodegradable and non-recycled. These cause pollution on the planet if thrown into water, or on land. These bags release toxic fumes when burnt. Therefore, if a person takes a step now, and does not use these plastic bags, can still make a positive change on our earth. For instance, in the past, I used to buy plastic bags to carry groceries, but now I am aware of the problems created by these bags. Therefore, I carry reusable cloth bags. I think that I am making a positive difference.
In conclusion, although global issues are serious now and an individual can not immediately make a positive difference. These small steps now can help to deal with these problems in the future by using fewer personal vehicles and stopping the use of single use plastic products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he use of single use plastic products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90675241158 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69980069853 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546623794212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4861397683 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.733333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190714462907 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694908064733 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710414797772 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140945243794 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079600203998 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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