In 120 to 150 words, write a letter requesting information about the course "Coping with loneliness".
December 15, 2020
Dear Mrs Nhat,
I am writing this letter to enquire about the “Coping with loneliness” course you advertised in Binh Thuan Magazine.
I am a high school students and have a pretty good result in school. Admittedly, I have a good sense of humour and have the ability to holds other attention. However, I do not have many friends and have no close friends. I have no idea about the reason why this problem come to me. I feel so lonely and upset all the time and always find a solution for my problem.
I would also like to know how much the tuition fee will be if I enrol early.
Could you advise me which of the courses I should take?
I hope that your answer to my questions will help me to make the right decision about the course.
Thank you very much for your time. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Nguyen
- Visual impairment 56
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- In 120 to 150 words write a letter requesting information about the course Coping with loneliness 53
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...always find a solution for my problem. I would also like to know how much the tu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 157.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35668789809 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29336515037 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675159235669 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4643461917 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1818181818 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126954770678 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385820319166 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867428816464 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782432391968 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1262265521 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 12.4159519038 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 78.4519038076 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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