The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities

Essay topics:

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities

the data illustrates information about typical temperatures and the annual number of hours of sunshine in London.
Temperature degrees for London and New York are similar but New York's temperature in summer Warmer and in winter colder.in this two cities the hottest days in July and at 29 in New York and 23 in London. contrarily in Sydney the hottest weather in January and in December at 25 degrees. Per year the coldest weather in New York is 5 gradus and paralel with this in London coldest weather is 8 gradus.in other side in Sydney weather falls in July at 16 gradus. concerning hours of sunshine Sydney and New York has same hours of sunshine 2535 and 2473 hours.
Consequently New York is the hottest city among these three cities and have highest hours of sunshine. Sydney has the enjoyable weather and London is the coldest city among these cities with 1180 sunshine hours

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, if, so, thus, while, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05172413793 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71329356135 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562068965517 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1065588744 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23937898419 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819417628043 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773216993118 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151107641996 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368679429039 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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