Your colleague loaned you a book to use in a presentation at work. Write to your friend to say:
What the presentation was about
Why it was important
How the book helped you
Dear Mike,
I am writing to express my gratitude for lending the book “Remote sensing and the environment” written by J. Johnson. As you remember, I was giving a presentation at the office concerning the latest technologies and usage of remote sensing data in oil spill assessment.
This presentation was significantly important for me because I was giving a speech not only in front of the manager staff but also in front of one of our major clients, Chevron oil company. In fact, the signing of a contract was at stake.
Thus, the book was a great help in the preparation of my presentation by providing a detailed description of the procedure of a site assessment following an oil spill event. That is why I was able to describe all the crucial moments of it to our customer.
Once again, thank you for your well-timed help.
Best regards,
Maria
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-12-20 | Mariamirabella | 56 | view |
| 2020-08-04 | Mariamirabella | 73 | view |
- Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment 46
- Some people think that new technology always improves the lives of workers Other people believe that it results in disadvantages for workers Discuss both the views and give your opinion 78
- Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days What are the reasons for this What can be done to tackle this problem 89
- In some countries, there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much of their time at work and not at home. Do you agree or disagree? 61
- You are promoted as the senior manager of your firm Write a letter to your employer In your letter you should say how you felt in the firm what additional responsibility you think you have now express your gratitude to the employer 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8255033557 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9919339638 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644295302013 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8413266481 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321899158516 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116126286408 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551253816505 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176879399126 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00974859711229 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.