A restaurant has placed an advertisement for a manager in the local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
explain what you are currently doing
describe your suitability for this job
Tell them when you are free to attend an interview
Hello Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest for the profile of a manager in your restaurant since I saw the advertisement in yesterday's newspaper.
My name is Chirag Bhardwaj and I belong to Gurgaon, which is a component of the state - Haryana. I am working as an assistant manager in Mariott for more than 3 years. I am managing a team of 16 members and prepare daily reports and maintain weekly consolidations of the department.
Furthermore, I completed my hotel management degree from ABC university, Canada and went to Dubai for 3 years internship. I have gained 7 years of support and managerial experience in food and beverage sector; thus, I meet the qualification requirements for the position. Moreover, the location of your restaurant is within 2 kilometers from where I sojourn; hence, I could come anytime in case of any urgency.
I would be happy to appear for a face-to-face interview on this weekend as I get my weekly-offs on those days.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Chirag Bhardwaj
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99441340782 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15727652602 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6351967276 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25695145041 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869398633165 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713277617572 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130460764865 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900187472562 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99441340782 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15727652602 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6351967276 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25695145041 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869398633165 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713277617572 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130460764865 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900187472562 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.