Do you agree or disagree the following sentence When people communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work of the project | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree the following sentence.

When people communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work of the project.

As we can notice, there is a tendency for us to use e-mail for communication instead of face to face. Though sending e-mail is convenient and helpful sometimes, I hold the view that we can be more productive and accomplish better work product with the interaction in person, and I will demonstrates my opinion in the subsequent passage.

First and foremost, people are more used to communicate face to face, which makes they have understanding of other’s thinking. If we only send massage throw e-mail, it is harder to get the point of other’s perspectives and more difficult to cooperate on work. For example, I was a legal intern in a law firm, and I was assigned to do due diligence. At the beginning, my senior connect with me and delivered the working information by e-mail. Not surprisingly, I was so confused about the work, even though I tried my best to understand what she want me to finish. Therefore, I ask her if she have time to talked about the work face to face. She agreed, so we had a small talk about the assignment. I totally understand what she meant in details, and we finished the project effectively and smoothly. If I had just used computer to contact her, we could have never did the work well.

In addition, communication in person gives us a chance to know the real emotion of others, which is significant to effective interaction. Without the concerning to other’s feeling, it is impossible to have good cooperation. For instance, when my cousin started his business, he liked to use methods on Internet as media to contact his customer. They negotiation through e-mails, which makes he can work home. However, he gradually realized this way is the reason why he did not have many customers. Customer expected the seller concerned about their feelings and they real needs, which are hard to be showed and satisfied by e-mail. Thus, my cousin transfer to visit each customer in their factories, for he can have the chance to notice the emotional feeling of his customers. After he did this, his business enlarged swiftly and he has became successful in local.

All in all, I sincerely believe that communication in person produce better work project. This is because face to face interaction is easier to be understood and more likely to have emotional contact.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'demonstrate'
Suggestion: demonstrate
...h the interaction in person, and I will demonstrates my opinion in the subsequent passage. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: MASSAGE_MESSAGE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'message'?
Suggestion: message
...ng of other’s thinking. If we only send massage throw e-mail, it is harder to get the p...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... I tried my best to understand what she want me to finish. Therefore, I ask her if s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... to finish. Therefore, I ask her if she have time to talked about the work face to f...
^^^^
Line 3, column 865, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...ter to contact her, we could have never did the work well. In addition, communic...
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Line 5, column 839, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...is business enlarged swiftly and he has became successful in local. All in all, I s...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82575757576 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85756285903 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540404040404 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0438852323 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201521842109 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585055866221 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600486949606 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129856951326 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389033987014 0.0645574589148 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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