Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as time with family and leisure needs. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve?
Although such topics will never yield a consesual agreement, a dialouge on Balancing work and spending time with family can lead to thought-provoking discussion. my view is that, irrespective on numerouse argument that exists on either side, we should balance the timimgs for works and consequently time with family and lesisure needs is considered. through the course of this essay i shall explain my point of view by considering on both the sides of the argument.firstly, people should maintain a time table schedule of balancing the work time and spending time with family. As they work, people nowadays they are working more time than spending with families which is unhealthy for the family and kids. parents are responsible for their kids how they grow in a disipline way. work is important for a family which gives them money, food, shelter eventually we should see how kids are be grown and we should spend time by teaching them good habbits and we should motivate them for a good pathwaySecondly, people are very eager to earn money which will not put to an end, we find many parents go overseas to earn where they cannot stay with their family and leisure needs.people when they are far away, kids finiding dificulties to interact with their parent when they are in most needed.To conclude with, parents should make an time schedule by equalling the time with family, parents are responsible for their kids dicipline and future. people should have some vacations with their family as they work hard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95275590551 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71857734511 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543307086614 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.982020525 50.4703680194 374% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.714285714 104.977214359 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.2857142857 20.9669160288 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2340057649 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136989161142 0.0925447433944 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051491569116 0.071462118173 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2340057649 0.151781067708 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 12.6369458128 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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